Once apon a cave there was a bat named Collie
she was very different.All bats were black and she was purple
she called that very unique. Everyone laughed at her and she could still
hear the laughs out from her cave house. That night she decided to runaway from the
bat village with a handkercheif, cave tracker,picture of family. And one of each thing in the
village. Why Collie wanted to runaway was she was tierd of being laughed at so that night
she ran from home when everyone was fast asleep In the morning with an umbrella she ended up lost and started to cry
in the morning Collie her mom dad and her sisters cried .And one Night she remembered
her Father told her her to face her fears so that night she waited then found a light and followed
it she ended up in her village and everyone was happy and they told her dad she was sure
to be Mayor when she grew up
THE END
4 comments:
Fantastic writing Maureen! I love the adjectives you put in your story.
Your thing is just great i really liked it From Sophie
I like your story Maureen you have lots of details
write more!by Sarah your friend
I like your stories and it was great! From Jessica
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